Alright, first critique.
Vision-Excellently done. I'm not sure how you wanted exactly but if I were to do this I would be VERY satisfied.
Originality-I haven't read the novel yet so I can't answer entirely, but I'd say pretty original characters.
Technique-The lighting, rain, expressions, everything is done carefully.
Impact-Huge impact. You can easily see the connection between these two characters, I want both if them alive, yet I haven't even read the novel.
Overall-Touches you and reveals a little bit of the two characters' personalities. The technique makes me jealous. I don't have enough thumbs for my thumbs up.